So true...*hundreds of angsty teenage girls nod in agreement*. Great monologue...so honest and sincere and soo true!!

I think it's deep, beautiful and sad.It makes me want to cry my eyes out.I think you are a great writer.

Well...I liked it...I myself am 3/4 emo...Well, one thing for sure, you're great at writing sad things...I almost cried. But I can see where you thought it was cliche-y, the whole best friend in love with best friend thing. But I honestly loved it.

great job, the raw emotion really touched me, but alle caps really draw away from it, try using italics instead of caps. i know how it is to fall in love with a freind and have them do that, its crappy but theres really not much you can do.

yup, "cliché-y" describves its basic idea and plot. Very sad... it immerses the reader a bit to feel the sadness in the monologue... I feel it. full of anguish. but I enjoyed it, I enjoyed it very much. hm, going to update Rainy Day Woes anytime soon? I really enjoy it. anyways, this was sort of pointless [the review], so I'll leave now;
always till the end,
Anrui

this was really great! you ever consider making a story out of it? and i for one dont think its cliche, but hell, what do i know? im 14! *laughs* and i'm barely writing a play right now. but it was still really good