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TS 2005-05-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI just wanted to say that I think your story was really well done. The suspense was quite well portrayed and the stylistic methods you used to do so were intriguing and used magnificently. 7.5/10.
ayliannah 2004-08-23 ch 1,	abuseHello Werecat, another great short story!I believe that instead of starting at the beginning i will start at the end. Although i felt relieved for the man his emotions were sometimes clouded. Of course, sine i have read your work, the amount of gore sustained in my subconcious has grown substantially. I am sure that there are others out there that can write gore, you just seem to explain it with more thorough thoughts and feelings. I am starting to like the nightmares that come your way from your various pieces of work. no errors of any nature that i can pick out, i'm sure that you have been alerted of them before and have fixed them... I am no use as of now..maybe later on a new piece of work...like Auto Da Fe. ;)
Tipped 2004-05-05 ch 1,	abuseOo... creepy... I totally loved it! The only thing I would change is one of the ethereals you used to describe fingers. Other than that it was so captivating! I liked the killing paragraph, not because I'm homocidal or anything, but it was so... I don't know, so something, and so gripping...
Fabian Cortez 2004-02-25 ch 1,	abuseThis is very good; totally intriguing, compelling and well described. I would probably just run through it again if I was going to enter it to a competition though, just to see if anything could have a little more description or perhaps sound slightly better re-worded. Then again I would probably do that about fifty times and still not be completely satisfied if it were something I'd written as I do with all my work, lol. This is good in its own right. Definately creepy; if I went through that experience it would really freak me out. I'd end up with sleepless nights galore. Eugh; the idea gives me the shivers. Very Well Done. KEEP WRITING!! F.C Check out my story "TORMENT" or "TORMENT2" if you like, it's a horror/thriller and I believe, hopefully a good one. Anyway it's had a good response and you might like it. :¬D See what you think.
Nickolaus Pacione 2004-02-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is well written seems like you and I share a title of the same name. You can find mine on diary-x, but thank you for review on "Darkness From The Skies." My one title "Theshold" is a Cthulhu Mythos. I do a lot of what I do on purpose with grammer though, but I used a primative word processor when I first wrote that one. Imaginative one here, thank you for not making me feel like I am one of the older ones on here.
Endless Nightmares 2004-02-15 ch 1,	abuseWow!- EErie dream. I have scary dreams as well. I liked your detail, because it seemed realistic. SOmetimes I have dreams where I can't get out of the water. I'll fall into a river, or stream, and never be able to reach for air. But this was just really creepy. Whispers In Silence
El Wraith 2004-02-03 ch 1,	abuseStrange though it may sound, this strikes me as an uplifting story. Yes, it is based on an intensely frightening theme. Yes, the brief descriptions of gore and violence burn equally frightening images into the back of the reader's mind. But that's a good thing. It gave the story substance and movement, and made the ending all the more profound. And the ending is what makes it so uplifting, so (dare I say it?) hopeful. The character seems to have passed through the major components of a reaction to a conflict; he/she/it was in shock (the bed), then in denial (refusing to look at the mirror), then consumed by anger and despair (urge to spread death and misery), and by the end he had reached a calm and somewhat eerie sense of acceptance. It makes me think that death itself is little more than another conflict in life, that can eventually be overcome. You've captured the wild emotions of a thunderstruck (pun not intended o.O) soul, and done it beautifully. By virtue of appreciation for fine literature or sheer morbid fascination, I'd say that this is on my top three list for favourite short stories on all of FP.com. Really vivid and engaging. May you be inspired to create other such works of art! ^_^
Loki Mischeif-Maker 2004-01-31 ch 1,	abuseStares, shaking slightly, at the ending. I actually did that for about a minute. I was really pulled into this story, even with the gory details and everything I usually don't like. You have an awesome way of writing things. This was awesome, scary. It felt so wierd. I liked it.
Crow08 2004-01-28 ch 1,	abuseBloody, mysterious, eerie: everything a good horror story should have. It is written in true style and has a certain chill to it. Excellent job.
DeathsDragon 2004-01-19 ch 1,	abuseCool. It's different and really sticks to you. Makes you think and puzzle. I love a story that does that! ^_^ DeathsDragon
Rionarayne 2004-01-17 ch 1,	abuseI can't believe it; there are so many different elements in this story it's hard to pick which one to praise first. Your imagery was fantastic, and the prose really accentuated it. The timing of everything was great; you effectively made the reader anxious right along with the narrator. Excellent work. Rionarayne
giygas666 2004-01-15 ch 1,	abuseWhoa...eerie, creepy, spooky, and all the rest. Very dreamlike; you see this in the character's perception of twhat's going on. I think you should definitely submit this to a contest.
Rai Kamishiro 2004-01-11 ch 1,	abuseDo you know those stories that you can't breathe until you've finifhed it? Yeah. If only all the dead and tormented could cross... BTW: I'm starting on Brother Sun, Sister moon this week. I WILL finish it. I hope.
Della C 2004-01-11 ch 1,	abusethis sounds vaguely of a Twilight Moon story...Rainfall. except from the point of view of one of his evil critterses. good stuff. ^_^
And Emo is Cliche 2004-01-06 ch 1,	abusethis is really creepy.. the music I was listning to didnt help it much.. but yeah it was really good. Your writing if very discriptive, I love that. I hate when its plain and boring. It's really filled in. Seems like it has the thought in it.

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