Hi,
A wondeful poem on the subject of war. I like the subject of war alot. Very nice.
Please read and review my poetry.
Thanks for sharing :)

wow that was SO good. I really loved the way you wrote it and how the rhythm really fitted and I really liked the third and last verse.
That was great
please review me

I put out a newsletter on the web, and every week we feature a poem, I read your over and I really enjoyed it and would like your permission to use it, it's very good, you would get full credit, and a copy of the newsletter. If you would like to know more about it, our website is
http://w.rebelweekly.itgo.com
you can email me at rebelweekly@yahoo.com, and my name Is Victoria.
thanks,
Victoria