Why aren't u adding more? I'm annoyed! Are u dun or something?

Love this story! Awesome! Add Chapter 9 soon, OK? You are a REALLY creative author! Can't think of any possible thing that can be improved.

Cow's blood?! Ew. *gags*
anyway, I like it (other than the fact that it goes pretty fast) the only thing I would change is that if I were kidnapped and flown way far away, I would be a little more confused, panicky, and be asking a whole heck of a lot more questions. And of course this would only be after I asked to see proof that what they were saying is true.

I like Jade pretty well although she isn't the best like Kit is

I bet Kit's really a princess. Lucky her!

I knew she put something in her water! I just knew it. Mirage seems nice and I can't wait to find out more.

Very interesting... somewhat hard to follow at certain points

This is good. She's a Princess! cool. fun, I am thinking that this is about finding her parents? And re-claiming the throne? Ha ha... laugh all you want.. I already know I am way off. I just like to guess... and I know I like reading peoples guesses on what is going to happen... it makes me laugh. lol. Keep writing.

"It sounded so distant, was I one the moon?" I think in this sentance you meant to put 'on' instead of 'one?' Just pointing it out. I like this, other than that I didn't catch any errors.
I am curious as to who she is though. I am also curious as to why she had to be unconcious to board the plane and fly to Mongolia. I have never been to Mongolia, but I have traveled elsewhere and I have never heard of anything like that so it makes me curious. And I am thinking that Mirage isn't telling her the whole story. I could be very wrong though.
Oh, and you were mentioning reviews. A hint, if you review people they will usually review you back. BTW- I was wondering which story you read that encouraged to add me to your fav's list. You didn't review, and I am curious as to which story you liked.

Good, a few tips and questions. Do her real parents live in Mongolia or something? Is she going to see them? And why did Mirage call her adoptive parents, foster parents? Because foster usually indicates a temporary home, not permanant as in adoption. Kinda fishy. lol. Okay, for a tip, in the begining you said.
"The symbol was on her arm. A sparkling red lightning bolt outlined in blue was on her arm. Then she dropped her sleeve over it, shielding it from view."
I think it would flow more smoothly if you said something like, "A sparkling red lightning bolt which was outlined in blue was seemingly tattooed on her forearm. She then dropped her sleeve, letting it cloak my view of the familiar symbol."
It's truly up to you, but if you like the sentance I wrote, you can use it, or if you prefer to keep what you have, it's honestly your choice.
I like this, keep writing.

Okay... getting a little strange... who is that lady that picked her up? And what was on her arm? Oh, and about the note, I like how you made her question what was said in the note the previous chapter. It adds a bit of mystery. But it may be a bit more subtle if you took out the same questioning at the beginning of this chapter, it just over stresses it a bit. Otherwise this is really good... I haven't found any spelling or grammar errors which is very unusual. Good Job.

That note sounds like something that would have been written in the middle ages... or by my grandparents... either way... something fishy is going on.

Pretty good so far... I am curious as to what was in the box, but i figure that will be explained later. And I have a slight hunch that her life isn't going to stay boring (as she proclaims).

i like this story so much. I'm going to recommend it in some of my stories and maybr you'll get more reviews!

The main idea of your story and scene is good, but your sentences are too vague. The reader is torn between different things without having first analysed what is given to them already. That's not to say pick it up and throw it away, I just feel it could use with a bit of revision and elaboration of ideas.
Other than that, you have a great starting point for potential of a good story.
-Celestial Sailor