Tell me you've never even tried this. AND reassure me you never will. As morbid as it may be, I like the ending the most. With the air bubble and all. It's really symbolic.

O.O;; wow! angsty! but good job with it all. don't get any ideas like this during synchro practice! XD *ahem* study hard for them final exams, okay?? I know that our biology one will suck...
-mo

hey ppl! im about to post another poem...but i wanna write another 1. GIVE ME IDEAS! bye!

Like I said before: really good. A little inconsitan at parts, but hey, it's your first poem right? I like it though, especially the part about having the water wash everything away...

I like this poem a lot! You did a good job. It actually made me want to do that! ...Not that that's a good thing or whatever but..yeah
*Allison
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