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Balmung
2004-03-25
ch 1,
...Good.
...Needs to be worded a little more different to be more effective to the reader...
-Balmung
AimeeRaven
2004-01-17
ch 1,
Hey! Lol, omg this is so ** optimistic...jeez...good for u! Honestly,it's so cool that you can think like that, i hella can't lol. Awesome poem! Love, Mia
Lord Unknown
2004-01-14
ch 1,
HUZZAH! Nicely done, and very true. Nice metaphor, also. It's a good way to prove your point.
Now on to type on my original story. FAREWELL!
the seventh seal
2004-01-07
ch 1,
This was great jess. not the style I usually like, but it was still awesome. Keep it up, ;)
mike
2004-01-06
ch 1,
this poem was fun to read and is great
PirateLass
2004-01-06
ch 1,
M...milk...
Oh, *ahem* anyway...
Very very good poem, J. So very true.
Merman: WHAT IS?
Not you again!
Merman: YES ME!
Curses...I need to get you back to Lucritia...
Merman: NO! I DON'T WANNA GO BACK!
It's worse here with me, you know.
Merman: ...TRUE, BUT AT LEAST YOU HAVE THE AZTEC GOLD
...True...
Merman: HA! I WIN!
Curses...
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