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| Balmung 2004-03-25 ch 1, | ...Good. ...Needs to be worded a little more different to be more effective to the reader... -Balmung |
| AimeeRaven 2004-01-17 ch 1, | Hey! Lol, omg this is so ** optimistic...jeez...good for u! Honestly,it's so cool that you can think like that, i hella can't lol. Awesome poem! Love, Mia |
| Lord Unknown 2004-01-14 ch 1, | HUZZAH! Nicely done, and very true. Nice metaphor, also. It's a good way to prove your point. Now on to type on my original story. FAREWELL! |
| the seventh seal 2004-01-07 ch 1, | This was great jess. not the style I usually like, but it was still awesome. Keep it up, ;) |
| mike 2004-01-06 ch 1, | this poem was fun to read and is great |
| PirateLass 2004-01-06 ch 1, | M...milk... Oh, *ahem* anyway... Very very good poem, J. So very true. Merman: WHAT IS? Not you again! Merman: YES ME! Curses...I need to get you back to Lucritia... Merman: NO! I DON'T WANNA GO BACK! It's worse here with me, you know. Merman: ...TRUE, BUT AT LEAST YOU HAVE THE AZTEC GOLD ...True... Merman: HA! I WIN! Curses... |