SO good. I like the name Ryland by the way. Your characters are well developed and I was bummed when I realized that the last time u updated was in 2004...so there probably won't be anymore updates haha. That's really depressing. OKay anyway. I like this ALOT

I just cried. I literally did. That was so vivid and amazing. The imagry was perfect and I felt as if I were living out this nightmare with Natalie. This is so well written. Im off you read more!

Very good, you need to get the rest up! *pokes with large stick*

wow that was soo good keep going!

this is really great update soon!

write more, write more! lol =)