Hmm... Over two years later and still no more chapters. What happened?? It's a good concept, and could prove to be a really good story. Continue!

It sounds good so far. Do you watch Smallville? Part of it reminded me of that. Smallville and Degrassi are the best shows ever! Well, if you do watch Smallville, I was gonna say something like to put someone like Lana in there. ANd if you don't, what I mean is to put someone he's in love with who he can't have. Maybe they hook up a few times but they always break up again because of his secret. Or something like that. Good job so far.

All i can say is... I loved this story!
After reading it, I can't forget what you wrote. It got me thinking. I thought about it for days on end. What would it be like if you felt no pain? but the only think that came to mind is, without pain, you have almost no life...
Pain isn't only physical, it's also mental. When you are sad, you feel pain. When you are feeling down, you feel pain. I guess without pain, you would not fear or have a sence of touch...
This is a very interessting subject you wrote about. Keep writting stuff that will keep people thinking weeks after they read you stuff! Exercise their brains for them lol.
Love ya! Miss ya!
Your bbf,
Sharon
P.S. I've started an account of my own... (I owe that all to you!) there are only a couple of poems there right now. Anyways, e-mail me k? xoxoxoxox

I like, i like! This proves to be interesting... anyway, i will read on!
and pleze, get another chapter in on Like in Spiderman.
~DB

A very interesting start. And nicely written too. Keep going and I will read more.

You're story is pretty good. However, I did notice a few mistakes. One of them being sort of technical. Now, I'm not certain, but I didn't think that immortals were immune to pain, just death. I mean, vampires can still feel pain, but they are immortal-- in a sense. Also, there are a few grammatical errors that you should look over and change. Also, and maybe it's just me, but your story is kind of confusing. Maybe that will evolve with time and more chapters. Other than that, it's a pretty good story and your character has a lot of potential.