I wish her mom had her sister and her dad had come in like 2 minutes before Elisha came home and parked in the garage so she didn't see his car. That would be great. Cuz he would've heard her.

wow. it's good :) although, i would love for you to finish it (or at least continue it). but u better fix noelle's dad and sister though! jks jks

hey, this is really good! i like it so far :)

very good... i feel bad for her... and i like tyler... you should continue this... and if she kills herself, you could write from tyler's point of view of being upset about it or something... but that's just a suggestion