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| Sterces 2004-03-24 ch 1,   | I like the images this put into my mind... This poem spoke to me! Nice work! Sterces |
| Flames and Shadows 2004-01-07 ch 1, | I like this one, it didn't have the rhythm of the other one but it made up for it in the message and plot. I have read many poems that talk of the breaking free but I like this one because it is about the time before being free. It describes the feelings of being trapped and lets the reader connect to why the subject needs to be free. YAY I love it, I think I am going to like most of your work, if not all of it. |
| Andaroes 2004-01-06 ch 1, | Good poem, reminds me of my character in a story of mine. His name is Alaron. It almsot sounds like a song, maybe ya sould make it into one. Check out my stories :). l8r |
| NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo... 2004-01-06 ch 1, | Pretty good for a rhymed poem. I love this poem. It's very deep and I think it's beautiful. Good job! Tokiko please check out some of my stuff too, okay? thanks.. |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-01-06 ch 1, | I LIKE THE WHOLE IDEA BEHIND IT. I LIKE THE WORDS THAT YOU USED. NICE WORK... |