Oh gee whiz in a bucket, I LOVE THIS ONE TOO. And it has meaning too, I mean, it's deep, but I can still figure out whats it's about, and it's really beautiful and expressive. I love.
-Sparky

I think this is a really cool poem. I like your style. The descriptions are good and everythign fits in. love it.

I liked this alot, the rhymes are clever, and they don't sound forced at all, and the imagery is beautiful. Excellent job!