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| Deviliscious 2006-11-28 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow. I'm glad I came upon this. I don't usually read haikus but hell, this is good. Subtle...yet with a edge. Love the line 'Midnight flames kiss welted skin'. You painted a picture with your words. Good job! Oh and I'm suddenly craving for teh tarik... damn >. |
| Daffodil Elizabeth 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseOo, you have beautiful imagery going on here. "Midnight flames kiss welted skin" - it so descriptive! Nice job! |
| Cloud Burst 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abusewow, beautiful |
| laughter at the funeral 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abusesubtle yet very very good...nice job...and thanks for the review on my poem liquefied mountains...although i could've appreciated it more if contained criticism on the poem... truly yours... |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseHello- interesting haiku. |
| bach-player 2004-07-19 ch 1, | abusei don't usually read haiku..but i loved this one, the dark edge was stunning..so well done. |
| M.J. Perales 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem but don't fully get the sentiment. I love the brevity and what you are trying to say, so good job. Anyway, you reviewed me a while ago and I thought I'd return the favor. |
| CoolBeans18s 2004-05-27 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. I love the vocabulary and imagery you have in this piece. Its dark and beautiful.. what a wonderful combination... ~ CoolBeans18s |
| catseyeview 2004-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI like the foreshadowing edge to this. |
| Spoonvonstup 2004-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOh wow... If I may "wowee zowee" I am honored you gave me apositive review because after reading this..*insert amazed whistle* Oh boy, I've got alot to live up to.. Inspiring |
| Dracula, Lord of the Vampir... 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abuseCool. I like the mystery. |
| Dancinggal5389 2004-04-16 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet, eloquent and mysterious. |
| atreju 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abuseGood God! I am loving this... |
| DrenchedDrumTech 2004-03-23 ch 1, | abuseahh.. very good job. seems a bit dark with a dangerous edge to it. good job. ~DDT |
| Franken 2004-03-12 ch 1, | abuseYou have a very large vocabulary and you seem to use it very well too! Your works are amazing. Keep Writin'. ~~Franken~~ |