What a beatiful image? You painted the most misterous, compelling and wonderful picture.I would love to try and illustrate your poem.The wistful innocence of the first impression dissapears as you look deeper and further. A true masterpeice. Are you published yet? You should be.

This is touching beyond words. It made me smile, and think...
Thank you.
- Linnet

beautiful, beautiful words. Such tender words for such a young age. You have an amazing grasp of langauge. Thanks for reviewing my poem.

wow, just wow. That was beautiful, I am speechless! It was so ... I have no words to express it. very good, wonderful word choices, really paints the pictures of it all. Wonderful, simply wondeful.
~Mel

Hm...this is such a soothing and relaxing poemt that makes one smile. Again, imagery and word choices were spectacular and wonderful and made me see what you described.
Enchanting and beautiful.
Keep writing.
-Seras