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Reviews For: A Sleep Deprived Love Poem
oohaysemag2001 2005-12-18 . chapter 1
Sounds as if you found that special someone in your life that makes the heart grow fonder.

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ode to a firefly 2005-09-02 . chapter 1
The second stanza is beautiful—strong rhythm, strong rhymes...beautiful.

~TPC~
ImmenseBloom 2004-01-07 . chapter 1
Thats pretty good , nice stuff , nice rythem , its pretty good . keep writing great poems cuz i wanna read them
Twissie 2004-01-07 . chapter 1
aww.. tender and sweet.
This was beautiful :)
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