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| Faunamon 2007-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI once saw a silver unicorn. I named her Danica. Well yeah. This is a really poetic poem. I mean it ^ ^ |
| Lossefalmiel 2006-03-07 ch 1,  | abuseOoh, I believe in Unicorns. This was a very good poem. |
| Ivy Orion 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseYou use such beautiful language when you right and you use it in such a way that it makes sense and flows so wonderfully. Congrats! |
| Siberia1 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abuseWhat a pretty poem. I like your use of language here; it makes sound like an ancient tale. Bravo! |
| eyelashxwishes 2004-03-23 ch 1, | abusewow...W.O.W!! This is an awesome poem! I'm Loving it!! |
| Amethyst Horizon 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseYou so rock! i LOVE unicorns so much! this is so going on my faves! |
| Pose For Me 2004-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome. OO... I wanna be Phoebe! I believe in Unicorns! -nodz- Yes, I actually do. But they're only visible (they're horns and magic) to others who are magical. -thinks she knows everything- Hehe. I wrote a poem about unicorns also. I think..-thinks about it- Yes, i did! "Tales of Unicorns." Yup! That's it! Okay, I'm done ranting. Beautiful work. Regina O.B. |
| Jess Angel 2004-01-07 ch 1, | abuseHm. Lovely. Beautiful imagery and excellent flow. Well done rhymes. The only suggestion I have echoes with the previous reviewer. I believe "Rising" should be "Raising". All in all, I enjoyed this :D - Write your heart. Write your soul. Write on! - Jess 0:o) |
| Sterces 2004-01-07 ch 1, | abuseOh my... This was so good... =O First I just want to point out one thing, because It's only one word away from perfect... =) On the 17th line: Rising its head; it is noble and pure. Shouldn't it be raising and not rising? Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think it should... Anyway, don't be discourage. THIS WAS AN AWSOME poem! I am DEFINETELY going to check out some of your other poetry... I come across a lot of poems like this that tend to be "sappy" or "cutsie", but you pulled it off! I love it. I admire how you stayed in rhythm with your rhymes, which by the way are wonderful! I always love it when I see some good rhymes. This was a very very very good poem, very well-written. You should be proud. Sterces (A 24 year old girl who likes unicorns) P.S. Sry, I'm silly sometimes. =P |