i like the way you chose to wrote it. i think it adds so much to the content.. hehe. me talking all smartlike. lmao. but no, very cool. and i agree.. we are all hypocrites.. go us. *TI*

I agree with the people that 'new nothing about poetry.'
I think its them that knows about poetry and you that doesnt tbh!

Your French class really sucks. lol. I liked it. i also think that the one word per line thing was kind of cool, esp. when it got to the point in the poem where you said that life is short. to me, that reflected on the the shortness on the poem and the irony that went with it. Keep up the good work.

It's not bad. It had potential. Not great, but really not bad. Only one thing really irks me: what's with the one word per line thing?