There is always one common theme in everything of yours I have read so far, death. Not only in the physical sense, but emotionally. Ideas of letting go of past ideas and emotions. While this is not bad in itself, I personally enjoy your nature poetry for the ability to paint such a vivid atmosphere and landscape with the words you choose. Angst is such a common occurance on FictionPress, you throw a rock, you hit an insecure teenager. If something is going to be written wholly negative, include a positive outcome or reinforce positive ideas to affirm the light in the darkness.
-Celestial Sailor

I like the idea of this poem!

I liked it. Pretty good. Except the first stanzaa doesn't rhyme as well as the rest, and sets it off to an awkward start. On the plus side, you end it wonderfully, which is what most peopple have trouble with. You leave a good last impression, but work on a better first.

wow, i really like it. its a great piece of writing, keep it up.