Hey, I really like the whole idea behind this poem. It's an interesting concept, why snow holds such fascination in the first place. I do like how you mixed in more compex descriptive lines with the ones that sounded like children's poetry, that's a neat technique. I think this would actually make a good song, so if that's what you're calling it, I can only hope there's a tune in mind. Overall, really nice.

A childlike prose in fields of snow glistens effective usage of repetition with stanzas, flow and rhyme. Crisp images, occasionally cliche, could use with slight refinement. I liked your metaphor usage in 'crystal world' and would really like another language feature used to enhance the overall feel, maybe a symbol. Euphemism may also give a more childlike notion which I feel is what the poem is quite effective with.
-Celestial Sailor

Love the title!
So far this is one is my favorite!