Another well made poem, that follows the same idea as some of your other works. One thing I would like to point out, however, is your attempt at rhyming just about every sentence. Although this isn't bad in itself, be careful what words you use and the relevance they have to the poem as a whole, otherwise you create unwanted images that deterr the reader from the main feeling of the poem.
-Celestial Sailor

Liked it very much...
Still keep on writing...

this is very good, it kinda reminds me of that Dave Matthews song, gravedigger, but its much less dark.
~Colleen