Right... Umm... Dunno what to say. Yeah. Um... I'll just go now. Weird...

I am to lazy to write something intelligent so I'll just put in a few dots... bd applause.
Nymph
P.S. Let's hear it for the dots . . . . . . . . . . .

Cool, it's dark and I really love the images. Great word choices through the whole thing, absolutely beautiful!

I saw the review. thanks... i think... pretty accurate guess, i am fairly new to writing poetry. as for this poem? not bad. needs a few rewrites, but it's pretty good.

Your 15mins ain't over yet girl. Damn good job.

Yes yes, this rocks! *head nods*
Ha! Now you must carry the head nod.
Enough of my drunken tomfoolery! On to the review!
This is great Josie. I liked it, and that should be all the praise you need.
My favorite line? Here;
"The petrified remains of a conscience
Hides in the darkness of seeming
-That little voice is yours"
I know, it's the ending, but it was really good.
And tell Wilderman that if he makes another class hate The Red Wheelbarrow, I am going to gouge his eyes out.
Cheers.