hye, i thought your story/pome was great!..i also feel the same way when it comes to my mom, i am 14 and i just dont think she understands me anymore. so keep up the good writing and have fun!

I think this is my favorite poem of yours. I can definately relate to it. It was very good.

A poem I can definitely relate to...great job!

Something that all girls can relate to. I feel pretty much the smae way.

I really like the language you used, you didn't make it to "I hate you!" but it wasn't " I'm really sorry i'm not your dream kid and it's all m fault." Sometimes i really feel that way too. That my mom just won't let me be...
It's really a great peom, it will stike a cord with all sorts of differnt people.

Last year I went through the phase that I didn't get along with my mom. Your mom does understand, she just doesn't want you to make mistakes that could hurt you forever. It's a good poem, and your Mom will be there when you need her. Mine was there for me :)

hey i know you! lol, hi, by the way. and i really like this poem it expresses the confusion and frustrating underlying so many mother-daughter relationships. i know exactly what you're saying. >.< so kudos for that great job!
~k8