GREAT IMAGERY!! I feel for the person in the driver's seat. Another great poem :)

wonderful! this poem is so incredibly awesome! i cried! i love it!! especially the parts in itallics...that was a great idea!!

I love it! This is such a sad poem. And I can seriously relate to it. Good work! Can't wait to read more.

Wow I liked that one alot... saddened me a bit, thinking about it. I have felt it, and deep down we all know time never heals all wounds. I love poems like this. Anyways, I liked it alot o.o; Fav list.
-Dai G

That was VERY good; nice, powerful poem. I liked the use of refrain, the metaphors, and the images I got from reading. I hope to see more like it.