how did you get inside my head and steal my feelings??

lol ty for the review :)
this one's really good too. but is it a song or a poem, because it looks like it would make a really great song. but just my opinion, it's you're poem and i still like it. good workies.

there are some cool lines in this. its a liottle repetitive. but if it was shortened it could be really good. nice job anyhow

Aw. Sad. Nicely written.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King