woah! another one that hits close to home! you do a wonderful job of replicating these emotions into your poems and i think this is the first anger poem i've read by you. i like how you spoke about taking the person's world and making cold like the person did to you. very nice touch.

Very nice, I like it when poems are just out of reach so you dont know exaclty what they mean but you get the feeling. This is very good.

Tough. Strong but tough. I like it though. Nicely done.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King