This guy has a mouth on him, lol. Guess that's why it's rated T. This was pretty amusing. The line "Maybe one of the holes that the possums go through up on the roof" cracked me up. And "ASAFP" made me giggle. Interesting. Anyway, nice last line. This was pretty random and pointless, but funny all the same, and aside from all the unnessesary language (didn't bother me, just didn't really seem to have much of a purpose in most places- though in some like with the ASAFP it was perfect) it was really good. An enjoyable read. Keep up the good work!

hey its nish, mad story, so funni it made me laugh so much. ease up with the swearing. a very interesting story very real. hahaha u r so funni

Doesn't make much sense.. The ** interspersed here and there don't make a bigg difference,,
At least you expressed your irrtation well, the adjectives were great!

Woah... a whole story about being locked out? Very creative... Ive been in that situation. Was that a true story? It seems a lot more funny later then when it actually happens... Pretty good story...