Great short story I loved it!

Whoa. WHat a piece! Your description and the orignality of the story! I applaud your ingenuity. Come up with more.
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oo, i wana kill Jordana.
beautifully written story. i like very much.

OK. This sent shivers down my spine. It's delicate, beautiful, heartbreaking, and all that jazz. It's so unlike anything else I've read. And your style... It just adds more power to the story, making it near-perfect. Wonderful.
"Barely did she manage grasp the alicorn in her hands" (?)