Very... religious sounding... did you write this after a service? ^__^
sorry if I'm being naiive about this one, since I'm not religious in any way shape or form, but hang with me please. I get this one, I understand the 'calling' part, and the part where you call for something from the forces above, and I get the basic idea of what that something is. Overall, GREAT IMPROVEMENT ^_^ I actually kinda sorta maybe get this one!
yes, this one is MUCH more understandable, the point and idea is much more clear-cut. Congratulations!
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pont (who talks to much and is sorry if she's annoying you or (as she probably is) is wasting your time)

You have the freaking coolest vocabulary ever (minus Cradle of Filth; don't ask me how they come up with stuff like "A Crescendo of Passion Bleeding"). You have a penchant for long-ish titles like that. As always, very poetic and very moody... I can see this being written by Poe. Great work!