This is a very good poem. I like how you took Tolkein's line and elaborated on it (but perhaps you should mention that it came from him). A few of the lines felt like they had a few too many syllables ("Not all who are alone are lonely") and some felt like they had too few ("not all girls are so sweet"). In general, however, it was a great poem and I enjoyed reading it.

I really liked this poem, even though it took me awhile to figure out the last line. XP

Nice. Very impressive adaptation.
In other words, I like it, I like the usage of Tolkien material, and I'm making yet another sad attempt to sound sophistocated.
At least I'm good enough to fool my teachers...