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Reviews For: Secret Admirer

Sir Exal
2004-02-24
ch 2,
Yess...Good. Very spooky and well-written. Make the chapters a little longer, and F.Y.I: it's psychotic
PussyKat
2004-01-13
ch 2,
Hiya. Told you I'd read your story, and I don't regret it either. This is very cool, I like! I thought the way the guy just killed the other man for his 60 dollars so casually was very disturbing. Hope update soon.
Blessed Be,
PK
gory haines
2004-01-10
ch 2,
Hey, thanks for the good reviews of my story, The Roadkill Express. I read your story and it's really not too bad. Everyone loves a good stalker story. There is one thing that I will say that may help you. I think that you could expand on your story and make it quite a bit longer. You could have written one whole chapter about the girl meeting Jacob and then breaking up. Then chapter two could have been about the man breaking out of the mental institute. And so on and so forth.
Keep on writing and try to get your ideas down on paper. I do know what you are talking about though, I have the same problem. Too many ideas and not enough time.
CobaltJewel
2004-01-09
ch 1,
Hey, It's the author
Anyone who's seen the old clint Eastood film "Play Misty for Me" (Fatal Attraction is a pathetic remake) you will recognize the phco stalker. This is loosly based on "Play ..." it is also based on my greatest fear:stalkers" so please read, you will be disturbed!
kg-rose
2004-01-09
ch 2,
o... its good. i like it. continue, i command you!
Stephen Hahn
2004-01-08
ch 1,
Im interested! plz write more!
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