|Reviews for Jade Eyes|
| FearOfClowns 1/8/04 . chapter 1
I really liked it alot. V. nice piece of writing. the only thing i would change is that the word eyes is kind of overused in this poem. great job
| simpleplan13 1/8/04 . chapter 1
i liek it.. great description & personification... why isn't the first line italicized?