This one doesn't have much to do with your penname, does it? Really good. It's rushing.

the last line is especially touching

I really like this poem! I love the line "choking on my fears"

great imagery! awesome poem!

Someone must have been backstabbing you big time, to write about lost faith, solitude and now about going up in smoke...
Very dark and pessimistic view on life and love, conveyed well in your work.
Write on!
Thank you for your review to SofS, it is greatly appreciated.

Good poem, I can definitely relate to the feeling. This was well-written, and I especially liked the ending. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Nice poem. Great imagery and use of words... Good work, and keep writing.

great use of metaphor! The effects of smoke like from a barbeque, where it seems no matter where you move, the wind will blow the smoke inot your face, but also right when yuou are least expecting. This is a wonderfully clever parallel to a past love that was not what you wanted, either unrequited or broken apart.
Nice work!

excellent. the serving of attitude in the last couple lines really finished that off perfectly