*Applaudes* Well now I'm not even sure what to say! It was almost lyrical and it flowed very easily. I read it a couple times over and upon the third time I just had to read it out loud and I found myself liking it even better! I just loved the feeling that it left me with albeight not a very happy feeling but really al in all a fantasti piece!
-Kelli

Bad trip, man. Bad trip. I do love the wording, that I do.

this is interesting.
i do like.

great word usage! I liked the emotions evoked. Thanks for writing!