So clear, and thought provoking almost crisp, I know the feeling. really cool.

Wow...how come I missed this? So deep chica! Just...powerful! Beautiful, exquisite choice of words and such strong emotion coming from the poem! Wow...I admire you, his is F A N T A B U L O U S! Btw, :D, I'm spreading the word 'Lufians' put it on my profile, lol. Thnx for all your reviews, didnt notice them cos of stupid fictionpress going wild again! I am an atheist btw, a very strong believer in it but atheist's prayer was written when i was truly desperate..and it was more of the thing 'if there's someone out there'. i have faith in goodness, not god...complicated, lol. Anyway much love chica...this rocks! Love, Mia

Sad. Deep. Truthful. Exellent work! It was really moving.

Hey old friend. Thanks for your review ages ago, and I apologize for taking so long to do something about it.
I don't know what to say about this girl. I'm just not in the right reviewing mind these days.
You know when I read those first few lines of your poetry - I was going like, omg this sounds so Shakespeare, but I like him and all, so that's a compliment I hope.
O, I loved this. I don't know how to say it, but there's just his underlying tone in the poetry that makes me almost want to cry.
Great choice of vocabulary here. Plus the image deserves one cookie too.
The way you phrased the words drew me into the piece. Very deep - I simply adored the way it flowed as well. Very smooth, very natural.
Loved the ending, somehow it looked as if someone was really falling. Very impactful, decidedly.
Ah, I don't know, this piece should have been easy to review, but my mind isn't working.
I shall go read some more of your stuff when that pink mash in my skull decides to reactivate itself.
Keep writing.

~Shadafakup

wow...that's all I can say. really insightful and something I can really relate to. God, I love this poem!

i like this alot...

I like it. Definitely feelings i go through... a lot. Anyways, I really like the way you get it across to the reader what you feel, and your style of writing. r/r some of mine too.

good poem. i can empathise, but not yet can i truly sympathise. but my characters can! please check my stories out, i also have nother penname OniKunoichi.
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*gasp* an update. and a very intriguing one, at that. there are a few sections which are almost shakespearean-esque, like "your eyes, contract my prudent heart . . . but in your presence, on my lips, its truth does fade" ~ it just *screams* shakespearean sonnet at me (i'm jealous, i confess, though as consolation it's kind of awesome to have shakespeare reincarnated for a friend ;)). the theme rings true ~ nice depiction of it through this specific relationship. plenty of great images, my most favoritest ones were "on my lips, its truth does fade," "my hands seem all too willing to drag you within Death's abducting reach," "i wish your eyes would curl and die," and "when your lips seek mine to dance." really good piece, sorry it took me so long to review it! i shall be counting the days 'till the next post ;)

I've definitely been in this state before. I loved how you expressed it... the emotion is powerful. Awesome job on this, very superb writing.
~Lidless Eye

firstly, you wrote im instead of I'm.
secondly, this poem's song is beautiful, the message so complex; the girl hates the man, but melts as he smiles, and hates him and herself for that... i know that situation allright...
the penultimate line was beautiful, encapsulating the thoughts of the woman. the word "fall" is perhaps superfluous in the last line, as the "aal over again" has enough presence to keep the ending heart breaking.
wonderful poem, well done.

Jesus, this is is great.