Holy crap this is good.
I love your writing.

Oh my gosh...This is pretty darn good c.d. This is really awesome. Pheonix. This is a fairly good exchange for dragons. :)
Keep Writing your stuff is awesome.
May your Swith sing,
-Eckrice

YES!
THESE are seriously cool. And I LOVED the way that you added the dragon into the mix and showed the different ways that they both live. I think (from the way that this flows) that you should maybe take this and make it a second chapter of the first one. Like, put it all into one work. ESPECIALLY if you're going to write a third one. Which you should. Because that's a really sad note to end on. And because I would love you forever if you would write more of these about the phoenix.
This is great.
Keep it up.
_Ahrar