"God isn’t available at the moment. At the tone, please GO TO HELL!” Oh, you're hilarious, LK. Jade's dark humor is probably one of the most grand parts of this fic, if not the groundbreaking seductive relationship between he and Ousel... whom, by the way, is mysteriously absent from this latest installment. Judging by Eclipse and Dusk's (yay! I love them!) abrupt return, she must be in trouble. I'd also like to express my envy of your writing skills and the wonderful description that makes Jade's and Ousel's world come alive in my mind. Oh, and before I forget to mention... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!
'Slayer
PS: The only strong offensive part of this chapter was your failing to mention the fate of poor Jacinth. Where is that pure-hearted (and most likely doomed) Shifter?!

AH! You've finally updated, LK! This was a fantastic chapter. Ousel was completely ruthless, and I loved the descriptive manner of the whole ordeal... especially when Ousel--erm, became suddenly on a first-name basis with the wall. That was so hilarious!! I'm SO glad you updated. It's really made my day.
'Slayer
PS: I didn't think Ousel could actually do it... you know, kill Jacinth. Is it the end for our Jade-resistant heroine?

Hmm... Interesting... very interesting. I'm definitely intrigued. It's really funny, but I'm also writing a fantasy novel (Rimrock: The Unknowing Oracle) with a seductive charicter named Jade, except that she's a woman. It's a little more like Tolkien's fantasy and has longer chapters, but maybe you'd want to check it out.

God! Naughty, naughty Ousel! This chapter was TRULY a magnificent one. I loved it! Not only am I falling in love with Ousel's darker side, I'm beginning to like Jade and his seduction more and more... They're so awesome as a couple! Great job, LK. Oh, and sorry for the lack of updates. I had a horrible virus, so I had to switch to my mom's computer... I won't be updating until the weekend, at least until I get my own computer fixed up. Anyways, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! And Coldplay ROCKS!
'Slayer

YOU'RE KIDDING ME! Oh, no! *cries, whimpers simultaneously* Ousel is NOT going to kill Jacinth! It's weird! But great... And I know where the whole "bite your tongue / do it for me" thing came from... Buffy the Vampire Slayer! I even remember the episode. Season four, episode three, "The Harsh Light of Day." Spike attempts to get the Gem of Amara and kill Buffy. I'm a Buffy-aholic, please don't be scared. I'm obssessed with that show! And also Angel... which is on tomorrow. Anyway, I like Eclipse. He has a black tongue... that's definitely creepy. What kind of person is he anyway, to swallow arsenic and not die? God, I love this story... Ousel and Jade are such a great, twisted dark couple that it made my brain freak out when Ousel talked about dumping Jade... *cries*
I rather like Ousel evil... even if it wasn't her choice. Maybe she'll embrace the dark. Or, you know, save Jacinth. Either way, continue updating! I LOVE YOU!
'Slayer

OH GOD! Ousel is NOT evil! SHE CAN'T BE!! Now instead of Jade wooing her, it's sort of the opposite... or at least that's the message I got, partly. I guess it was half-in-half. But anyway, NO! I'm going to hack into your computer and post a chapter that says, "Ousel Prevails Over Jade and He Dies in a Horrible Explodey-Death." Sound good?
'Slayer

More of Jade, now speaking Spanish. Great chap, by the way. Keep writing!!
'Slayer

YAYYAYAYAYAY! Jade is way evil, much more so than I've seen him in Shifter. Also, thanks for the credit at the end. *blushes* You must continue this story! And by the way, did you get Death Dealers from Underworld? Kate Beckinsale looks good in Gothwear... *shakes out of daydream* Anyways, I can't work on Taidel and it makes me mad, so I'll alleviate my anger by reading fics on Fiction Press. That should do it until I can get home and continue writing.
'Slayer

AWESOME!! Now Jade has a business; I don't know what the heck is up with that, but I'm interested to know more... As well as why he's looking for Ousel. Cool story. I thought the sequel was going to be made longer away though. Thanks for the reviews; I really appreciate them!!
'Slayer