|Reviews for Bridge Between the Hearts|
| warnthepenguins 2/10/04 . chapter 2
Well, your writing style's good. Probably the strongest part. But I much prefer the first-person you have at the beginning-the abrupt switch from 1st to 3rd almost jars out all connection between Andra and the reader. Also, if these are traditional elves, of the old faery style, then why are they not mysterious, dangerous, and Irish? Well, Irish is secondary, but you seem to make them just...tall and pretty. And shouldn't a mortal be rather plain, if not downright ugly, to their eyes, so accustomed to flawless beauty in all things?
| DispatchMD 1/9/04 . chapter 2
This is a nice story so far. I like it. Keep it up.