made a tear slip outta my eyes. sweet.
i'm addin ya to my fav's
-love, enat

I'm not sure if I got that or not, but your word patterns and everything are done beautifully. This is one of your best, I'm pretty sure.

love it. it's exactly how i feel sometimes...exept different...teehee. i like the part about the stars saying that it'll b alright. very nice

Aw, that's so cute. I love the way you made a poem out of a band term. I like this though, which is amazing 'cause i don't usually go for sappy ones. Anyways, enoguh of my rambling.

Articulate. Your title is worked into the body of the poem skillfully. Huzzah.

*smiles* That's absolutely perfect.

Interesting.
I like this very much.
Rather nice flow and loved the subtle emotion. Keep at it.
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Writing rocks! So write on!
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Jess 0:o)

nice rhythm ^__^

...such a way with words...i personally like the part about the sunset and all of the colors

lovely. *much applause*
~Tigress Moon