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giving in without a fight, i've done this way too many times but fighting is sometimes pointless if there is no end. good poem, i liked it.

This poem is beautiful, wonderful word choice and a very smooth flow. I enjoyed it immensely; You're a wonderful poet.

this is a very good poem i like it alot it is very sad
Brandybear

wow, great rhythm. and i like the rhyming too. it adds speed.