Oh my God... that last line threw me off a bit... But wow. you're great. Pretty good poem, and no I wasn't offended. time to go read some of your other stuff...

wow. really good. and its not unpatriotic because actualy this occurs a lot. like, especialy in the air force for some reason, there have been a bunch of instances of rape. obviously i support out troops (and want them to come home safe) and that dont mean i cant acknowledge that rape is wrong. anyway, good job.

hm. i don't really know what to say. i want to say it was funny- made me burst into peals of laughter, but i guess rape really isn't that funny. but don't get me wrong. it was a good poem, and a very interesting, new idea. with good rhymes. which i am a total sucker for in poems because i have NO IDEA what else to look for in a poem. So good job. You're a very good writer.
~Froggie0~
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very very emotional the end wasnt what I expected but I liked it.
p.s. my friend Imed me before I could finished my review on the dad thank you for your dna poem I was going to say jk more than an eight around a 17

Wow, this was fantabulous. (go me and my words :p) The ending was really unexpected and surprising. Great job!
(yes, my alter ego *does* like it :D)

Whoa...awesome ending. Really wasn't expecting that. Awesome poem! :o)

nice poem, i hope no one gets offended, but this is a good poem and good story, i like it alot, read and review some of my poems if you have time, thanks, bye

that is not a golden boy, rather a rotten boy...