I don't even know this guy and I already hate him. Very well written.

Beautiful and tragic. TTxTT

My special girl's ex was just like that, treated her like dirt and worse, called her fat and she's a stick (a pic of her and I [Jenny] is on my homepage). Revenge is so sweet and I know how it feels to want it along with her. Fortunitely he's heading off to Alaska for the army for college so maybe he'll be fodder on the battlefield if he's lucky... didn't mean to go on like that. Very powerful and such an intriguing expression of anger. Keep up the excellent work!

oh. I love the emotion in this... really raw, as the situation seems to be.. wonderful. Thanks for stopping to read Jigsaw. Check out more! :-P ;)

Wow, that was a very powerful piece. You convey emotions very well... I should write an anger piece sometime soon... I surely need it.

P.S. Thanks for the review! Hey, what's your MSN or AIM? I'd like to chat sometime.

-applauds loudly- sounds like how i feel about my ex who ruined MY life. very good and its nice that youre so protective of your sis

Powerful, intense and positively marvelous! I am revelling in the sincerity of this piece...all I can really say is wow...wow...wow...what torture both you and your sister must have gone through...whatever happened to her? rape? (that would sck bigtime...i know...) abuse? something else? wow, this was a great, heartfelt piece...one that leaves a shadow in my mind...
chloe

This fuck sounds REAL sweet...I hope he dies a nice, slow painful death by his pathetic vessel being skewered on a white hot metal stake, then lowered into a boiling lake of acid (ya know what I mean people) that eats away at his skin...THEN I hope a freaking necrophiliac rapes his corpse and serves the remains as chicken feed. Well, I need to get back to Group Theropy, see ya!

This is very good, and what makes it even better is the pure emotion behind it, I notice that you do put part of yourself in everything you write...

In the words of lady-of-the-wind, what a fucking jackass. I'm really sorry for your sister

Very powerful emotions, here.
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Awesome work. I hope he dies too. *sends Namir laser eye death rays at him*
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Keep writing.
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Namir Swiftpaw

whoa, very strong and powerful stuff you've written here. I dont kno who this guy is, but he seems like a total -in nicer words- jerk.
CA

Don't listen to Child of the Holy Grail, I think this sounds fantastic. Sometimes you just need to let your feelings out, so it doesnt matter if what you write sounds like a song. And who are they to dictate what poems should sound like? in my opinion they should keep their opinion to their self except the part about this being powerful. This really hits home with me, terrific job.
Maria

Sounds like someone I knew many years back, he threw away the nicest, sweetest woman you could ever meet...

I saw him in the news about 10 years ago, he got arrested for illegally importing hallucenogenic toads [it's the truth, I swear]...

Also; your line about religion in your bio is one of the best summations I've seen on the subject :-}
Well done...

Keep writing

i like that poem. i know how it feels to be friends with your sis's b/f and then he kicks her around... revenge would be a far dream for me, i'd just kick him slyly whenever i saw him. nicely written. r/r me sometime if you can
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