look just leave her alone she spent time writing this you could at least give her some good words about it and it says SLUG not sulg u thicko besides she neva used it bcuz it rhymes she used it bcuz it says: "you'll run a mile" slugs dont run they're s...l...o...w movers it means run and dont b slow about it unless u want me to ** castrate you!
wow i think this is great unlike those **. newa gtg lv tweaky x x x x x x

I'd say work on making it flow better. Also, don't resort to words like 'sulg" just because it rhymes, it doesn't make for quality poety. But it has godo emoton, and advice... that kidna thing. Not bad.