Aww! :3 *tears fill my eyes* That was so sweet, the whole lot of it. >w< I absolutely adore this story. The character were developed wonderfully, as well as the plot, etc...I just loved it all. Especially the ending scene. :)

Also, the lyrics in the beginning of each chapter made me smile, because I knew/loved almost every single song. By the way, The Used rocks. ;)

Great job. :)

~Maggie, AftG

It was cute! I love it. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

This was an adorable story. I love all the fluff and their first time was well written and so lovingly sweet.

congrats on completing this story.

This was a really cute story and I really enjoyed reading it. The one thing I noticed was Alex just disappeared and the conflict between him and Quinn never seemed to be solved. Other than that it was a really good story and I look forward to reading more stories by you. Great job!

I am so glad you found the umph to finish this story because its freaking awesome and youre awesome and Quinn and Josh are awesome and I had tears in my eyes...!

:)
very cute. enjoyed reading this story. :)

I love Quinn. The story was pretty good but near the ending it went downhill. I wish the sex didn't happen, it was... damaging.

omg...im completey utterly speachless! haha i could seiruly cry the ending is soo sweet ^^ i absoulty love your writing and the romantic scenes were brilliantly written :) i loved it!! a beautiful plot and characters and i bet that you could easily write a book lol you are amazing :D hahaha
10/10!!

Such a beautiful ending :-D
The Grammatical Errors were there... but... I can get over it... because it was a beautiful story :-D
and that last scene...
::looks at masturbated **::
well I guess I can't say much but it was HOT. :-D
But personally in my experience it was better going slow instead of just thrusting in... my first time was a thrust in and I sort of like got raw and it hurt bad... but then we did again slower and i got used to it...
but I don't know :-D
I hope the brother dies in hell, ** **.

i love the last sentence of this story, it's oddly serene and is like they both don't care about anything else but each other and it will always be that way. its good that you didn't load it up with drama in the final chapters, it is cute and it is sweet and it is better that way.

Nice. Long, i like the long stories. I think you wrote this story in a muture, but intimate way. It wasn't sleezy soundin either.
NS

I loved this story. It was so sweet...and so just awesome. There were a few spelling mistakes or typos but not many at all really...I think they were the general "typing too fast" things. And I loved that you made Quinn...I guess real crazy...I've known many cutters and I've had my own issues with self harm...and a lot of times these days people write stories where it's idolized or made to seem "cool" or "trendy" or whatever, or they write stories where the cutter/crazy person is just totally demented. And we're not all like that. I really liked that your story didn't do that.

Very enjoyable story. Perfect length and pacing. And the angst was just enough as well.

So far so good. I love the detail on the season - The imagery was a part of the story, instead something just stuck in there to make the story look good. Great start :)

Damn i love this story too, your stories rock. I love Quinn and Josh, they suit each other really well, and this story just seemed really original. Loved it.