I think we all had a friend like that, I know I did. Very good

i have, well had, a friend much like this.. yeah. it sucks. good poem other than
'That gives me I don't care when she does'
i dont fully get the meaning of this. you might wanna check and see if like you missed a word. other than that... yup yup. *TI*
plz r/r some of my stuff. thanx.

i like this..i can relate to this alot.

this poem is the ** i love you dani, this punk monkey girl who is 'origional' doesnt know what she is talking about cause she isnt i read her stuff and posted about that and other people dont think it is either but you are soo good at writing and i love you

Just caught the last line of ur bio as this was opening 'i hope to be a famous poet one day' i wish you every success in that. One question, how many poems have you currently got published?! Oh, well i guess that doesnt matter because when you're bigger and 'fully grown' (great title there btw) it'll all happen for you, and you might get some talent in the poetry side of things. Anyway best wishes i think this will be my last review as i've probably upset you enough although i didnt set off too. Your poems just werent very good. Sometimes we ahve to face facts.
Oh yeah and with the poem... i dont understand where the line 'that gives me I dont care when she does' fits in with the rest of it!?