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| sleeping Pisces 2006-03-09 ch 1,   | Crickets have been keeping me up these past few nights. Still, I like this haiku. |
| amy hobbes 2005-12-22 ch 1, | fabulous! i so agree. |
| .the twinkling of an eye 2005-05-21 ch 1, | Simple. Short, sweet, and simple. Captures an essence without precautious imagery and immense metaphors. I applaud your talent. |
| Shandris 2004-01-31 ch 1, | Comming from a small town, I love this Haiku!! Reminds me of home! |
| MR.SEAN 2004-01-12 ch 1, | Short and sweet, some people are so rude! |
| Youkos-demon 2004-01-10 ch 1, | Again...very short. It doesn't seem much thought went into this. |
| Linnet 2004-01-10 ch 1, | Oh, I see. Took me two of your poems to notice. Haikus, aren't they? -Linnet |
| Quoven 2004-01-10 ch 1, | I saw that it was nine words, and I laughed. I clicked on it just for kicks, but when seeing this, it kinda of simplified life for me. Thanks. |