   Rose of Battle 2005-06-14 . chapter 2This story was really good! You're good at realistic fiction! In some ways, it is harder than fantasy. |
 Lily and Tianra 2004-01-31 . chapter 2keep going |
 Aureole 2004-01-17 . chapter 2Great to see you've continued. It's really amusing. I love light reading. Keep it up. |
| Aureole 2004-01-11 . chapter 1 Not bad at all. Witty for some parts. Big potiential. Keep going :D (While I fix my fragmented sentences...) |
 Laurie_the_duck 2004-01-11 . chapter 1 wow, i was a bit sceptical at first, but this has potential. please update! |
 Sidewalks 2004-01-11 . chapter 1Hey, this was pretty cool. I enjoyed it, it made me smile. I'll keep tuned. |
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