This is so good! I really like it. It’s full of feeling. About the syllables and stuff, it’s in iambic pentameter, right? That’s what i learned sonnets were in. If so, lines 8, 9, and 11 have one too many syllables, and line 10 has two extra ones. It sounds fine, though, but I thought I’d just point it out. Anyway, I’ll shut up now. Good job!

that's good. really good. favorites list material. good job, and i don't know the rules of sonnet writing, but content wise it was really awesomely written. please review me sometime.
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love it love it love it! especially the last two lines! they summed everything up beautifully! all i have to say is that guys are poision, especially the ones that break your heart (and it sounds like you agree with me...lol *grin*)