 Kyketsuki Tenshi 2004-01-27 . chapter 4Well, knowing what little thoughts were running through your mind who knows who it was, most likely Orlando, Phillipe...a few others there, but those were my initial thoughts.
Good job my lil lady D :) |
 Fate Thirteen 2004-01-22 . chapter 4Orlando. Orlando Orlando Orlando. That is why you are my new goddess. *worships* |
 Fate Thirteen 2004-01-17 . chapter 3OH, WOW...
I think that's all I can say at this point. Sorry for the lack of critique.
Wow.
*wanders off* Wow. |
 Stylish Riot (cant be arsed logging in) 2004-01-17 . chapter 3 Yes, I would sleep with my favourite celebrity after a couple of hours. Definelty. |
 Kyketsuki Tenshi 2004-01-17 . chapter 3cool, probably more a story for the girls than guys, but still cool. |
 Staring at Horizons 2004-01-14 . chapter 2 I'm picturing the beautiful O.B. too... Hehehehe.
I am hoping for more, just so you know. |
 Stylish Riot 2004-01-14 . chapter 2Argh!! *gets all flustered and runs around in circles a little bit* Many, many good things in this story… ‘on the phone to Tarantino’, a ** decent dress, blowing off snooty mates, French films… Oh, god. I’m really wondering who you’re imagining this guy to be! At first I was kinda thinking some strange mix between Johnny Depp and Jake Gyllenhaal- but then he said that he’s enjoying seeing his mum again, so he rather immediately transformed into Orlando Bloom. God, this girl is ** lucky… |
 Stylish Riot 2004-01-14 . chapter 1Pink diamante empire line? Holy ** **…
I love the bit about not drinking and only to the hard drugs, not in a personal way, but that’s beautiful.
M, yes, I love it, can’t wait to see more. It’s very British, very funny, and (well actually very chick-flik). I love it. Brillo (note)pads. |
 Fate Thirteen 2004-01-11 . chapter 1I thought I should read something of yours, and this was top of the list. It's nice work!
Your writing is very visual - I could see this hot sticky London street so easily, and the dialogue just enhances it perfectly. Internal thoughts also spot on.
Although, this is a pure nitpick, I am reliably informed that Darius is more 'animal' in bed.
I hope this continues - me likes muchly. |
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