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| girl with rad i o 2005-11-10 ch 1, | lovely imagery. i love the ending, the "continuing to seek what reality took away" bit. nicely written. xo - Rei |
| Marlon J. Locsin 2004-02-20 ch 2, | cool astigas! |
| emerwen 2004-02-01 ch 5, | hey, this was good, sound kinda like me... singing alone and everything, but i would want to solo in front of a ton of people anyway. i would probably pass out! lol toodles! |
| restless-wandering 2004-01-26 ch 4, | short and simple, you sound like a tortured soul, but then again, aren't we all? |
| restless-wandering 2004-01-26 ch 2, | oh, like the author's note. I so agree. Darkness is so pretty, like black velvet. After all, light can be just as evil as dark... What else would you call cancer calling UV rays? |
| restless-wandering 2004-01-26 ch 1, | Dark Side of The Moon... o, like Pink Floyd... tee hee :) Anyways... like it very much so far, i do. Moving onto the next... "Onwards march!" |
| Opal Ballerina 2004-01-17 ch 4, | All of these poems are written so beautifully. They are short, but they're meaning is still said. Very impressive. |
| Opal Ballerina 2004-01-17 ch 1, | Reality... darn you! LOL. Nice poem. In response to your comment on "Sweet Dreams"; what I meant about 'Maybe perhaps two' was referring to singing two lullabys. I don't like to put commas and periods in my poems- but it was just referring to the lullabys. Thank you a bunch for reviewing my work. I will do my best to return the favor. Regina O.B. |