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Reviews For: Dark Side of the Moon, Where light and dark meet

girl with rad i o
2005-11-10
ch 1,
lovely imagery. i love the ending, the "continuing to seek what reality took away" bit. nicely written.

xo - Rei
Marlon J. Locsin
2004-02-20
ch 2,
cool astigas!
emerwen
2004-02-01
ch 5,
hey, this was good, sound kinda like me... singing alone and everything, but i would want to solo in front of a ton of people anyway. i would probably pass out! lol toodles!
restless-wandering
2004-01-26
ch 4,
short and simple, you sound like a tortured soul, but then again, aren't we all?
restless-wandering
2004-01-26
ch 2,
oh, like the author's note. I so agree. Darkness is so pretty, like black velvet. After all, light can be just as evil as dark... What else would you call cancer calling UV rays?
restless-wandering
2004-01-26
ch 1,
Dark Side of The Moon... o, like Pink Floyd... tee hee :) Anyways... like it very much so far, i do. Moving onto the next... "Onwards march!"
Opal Ballerina
2004-01-17
ch 4,
All of these poems are written so beautifully. They are short, but they're meaning is still said. Very impressive.
Opal Ballerina
2004-01-17
ch 1,
Reality... darn you! LOL. Nice poem.
In response to your comment on "Sweet Dreams"; what I meant about 'Maybe perhaps two' was referring to singing two lullabys. I don't like to put commas and periods in my poems- but it was just referring to the lullabys.
Thank you a bunch for reviewing my work. I will do my best to return the favor.
Regina O.B.
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