|Reviews for Watch Me Mummy|
| Story-Teller's Aide 3/13/04 . chapter 1
although it was a good poem, children are children and shouldn't be stopped from doing things just because they can be dangerous. should we stop crossing roads?
| XfallingleafX 1/11/04 . chapter 1
I can't see any problems with it. Its great. My fave line/paragraph would have to be:
Watch me sink,
Watch the bubbles,
Watch my eyes,
No more cuddles.
Keep it up!