aw... sad...

You have an interesting effect going on here - the language is very casual yet the message is painfully poignant. Well done.

Not a happy ending. It sounds like it hurt.

If I didn't know better, I'd SWEAR it was in RAP format, but I'll forgive that due to its depth and controversy. It was a wonderful piece and, without too many words, effective emotes on a personal level.

That is so sad. Was this a true story? This was emotionally riveting. Great job.

very upsetting yet very emotional! i liked it...

wow... confusing, but sweet i like it alot

That's incredibly sad. The emotion just screams out of this poem; you've portrayed the shock and horror all of America felt on that day. The last line is especially moving: "I waited in Boston; she never left Manhattan."

sad...

This is sad. I like it however.